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Sketchy Sketch Kelly by ~Rosey337:iconRosey337:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Portraits & Figures

©2009 ~Rosey337
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:< it's a portrait of muh friend Kelly aka :iconzipperaward:.... but this pic is giving me such birth pains. guhhh.... There's something wrong with her lips and her cheek and I don't know what to dooooo. >< I'll prolly have to erase and start over but maaaan I do not want to do that.

[edit]Now that I look at it, I think the chin has to come in more. it's jutting out too much.

PLEASE HELP ME! Critique is encouraged.

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~teramiku Apr 18, 2009, 5:29:51 PM
I love this picture already! I really love the hair. :)

I think that maybe you should smooth out the cheek a little more and make her face seem a bit more round? The jaw should probably go in a TINY bit more and really that's all I see. :/

Great job on it though. :)

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~Rosey337 Apr 18, 2009, 5:33:13 PM
Thanks! :D and thanks for your advice. I shall implement it soon! Yuss.

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"'Oh, the Colboard, the Colbert Nation message board. I read that once....never again.' Then he goes, 'Yes, I am scared! Oh yeah. Love that fanfiction....' Then he adds, 'Me and Jon...never did it...,' then nodded his head yes."
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~InsideMyMind Apr 18, 2009, 6:39:52 PM
the chin should probably come in a bit, like you said. and the cheeks look ok, but if you want to change them, i'd say you just need to show a slight line for the cheek bones maybe. not a lot, just a very SLIGHT dip in the sides of the cheeks.
i do like the picture over all :) the shading is amazing as usual and the detail is wonderful

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I'd keep screaming,
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I'd break you down,
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~Rosey337 Apr 18, 2009, 7:05:25 PM
Thanks! I'll do that :)

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"'Oh, the Colboard, the Colbert Nation message board. I read that once....never again.' Then he goes, 'Yes, I am scared! Oh yeah. Love that fanfiction....' Then he adds, 'Me and Jon...never did it...,' then nodded his head yes."
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~zipperaward Apr 19, 2009, 7:18:01 AM
I dunnah what to say, I fail at everything proportions, so......


teehee, me gusta.
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~Rosey337 Apr 19, 2009, 7:26:30 AM
:3 :glomp:

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"'Oh, the Colboard, the Colbert Nation message board. I read that once....never again.' Then he goes, 'Yes, I am scared! Oh yeah. Love that fanfiction....' Then he adds, 'Me and Jon...never did it...,' then nodded his head yes."
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~Cyberpunk14 May 14, 2009, 12:29:51 PM
OH MY GOD; that really looks like Kelly! :wow:
*must practice drawing realism*

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~Rosey337 May 14, 2009, 12:32:55 PM
Thank you! ^^

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"'Oh, the Colboard, the Colbert Nation message board. I read that once....never again.' Then he goes, 'Yes, I am scared! Oh yeah. Love that fanfiction....' Then he adds, 'Me and Jon...never did it...,' then nodded his head yes."
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